Friday, September 11, 2009

The mistake I made...

I am the fool I always knew I was
I had seen it coming
For I took their advice
Day and night
And yet knew it wasn’t right

For I trusted my friends
And the world
And my family and my love
I hung on to their thoughts
And I believed in their words

Don’t get me wrong
They do love me
And I know they did their best
But what I did not know
Or refused to believe
Was the simple fact of being me

For in the past
And in the present
And in the future that holds tempting delights
We have all made and will make
But one small err
Of not trusting ourselves enough to make a mistake…


sujit said...

its pretty .. its more lik a feelin dan a poem... :P ... watsoeva it is .. the err wud b k.. >:D> nice way to gt feelingz :P

Prateek Shah said...

Beautifully penned Aashi :) Although hope its nothing too serious bothering you. No doubt, we all err.

Great to have you back at doing what you do best, writing!

Vikram said...

Well Truly said..:)
in fact no1 has time to think what they want for themselves...
evry1 has become so meterialistic that there is no space for emotions left over...
tht includes even me...:)

Aashi said...

@suji wuji...well its not exactly a feeling and honestly this is the most impersonal poem iv ever written...the thot just came 2 me really....

@prateek...well i hope what i told sujit answered your question...nuthing serious :) and thank you...i just hope i can continue it :)

@vix :)...well thts a new interpretation...i nvr thot of writing abt materialism..but its a diffrnt thot...u only go on 2 proove what i always say..a poem is read diffrently by diffrent people :)

Anonymous said...


wats rong???????



d one before was a sneeze :P i got cold

hey cheer up sweety

Harish said...

hm.. i can relate to that, some how seems my story..

ramlakmi said...

Well Said..

Nothing but "Ficus" said...

Hey there. Ran into your blog from indiblogger, and found it so much similar to a post I wrote very recently :)

Yeah, sometimes we make mistakes ourselves. Othertimes we trust others so much that we get lead on to make mistakes, and stick to them, even when we realize what they are.

I guess to reflect upon it, and understand what the mistakes are, is one way of moving forward. me, I have made too many :)

Pratibha The Talent said...

very true and self belief is the most important thing .

Nalini Hebbar said...

The toughest thing ever is to be true to oneself! can try to most of the time but never always.


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