Monday, November 27, 2006

this was a poem written in the spur of a moment
a v crude poem 4 sure
n yet i am trying 2 explain of my writing...
i cudv improoved on it
but i am letting it b

all i want 2 say is a sry 2 sum1...who mite mind it........so i hope u 4give me...n yet understand y i am doin this......

UNTITILED

thr r many things
left unsaid in life
v think
wat the heck
life will go on
n thn
this time cumz
wen u dunno where 2 go...
life bcumz a box
a wall on each side
its strange...
ppl r simply gng on
as if nothin has happnd
no 1
sees tht emptiness in my eyes...
n those who do
well thy simply watch
sumtimez r helpless
n all i can tell them
the only ans 4 tht luk
is always

nothin

4 comments:

shaks said...

hey...
Look who is writing this....
someone who asked me to take life easily....
What happened....life's getting a bit complicated???????
But I was touched....by this piece...
U r really hurt.......

Aashi Joshi said...

i never said lyf is easy shaks...all i said was that lyf is beautiful...and if taken positivly.,...one can ovrcum the negetivities....yes this poem is negetive...thou this is not 4 me...or on me..newy...its not tht i nvr feel low.......but i still stick 2 wat i hv said b4...try n take a positive approach 2 lyf....n believe me...the pain wud cum down.....its tough..but possible.. :)

Vikram said...

I never knew this gal has so much in store...i wud say things come hard n strong to hit u n blow u dwn if u go through this patch unscathed then u wud become a strong human to take on ne gaint... go on hard n strong at the problems until it kisses ur feet n approve his loss... n dont forget dont loose ur emotions in the process... hahahaha
enjoy life...

honey said...

hai aashi....this poem u writtn in a spur of the moment...hhhmmmm.....maybe the person u want it to read will know.....bt frm my point of view....it feels incomplete....maybe it shud be dat way...i dunno...

bt this poem is very touching....all ppl can relate to it...v all come across this type of situation in our life....dats y...i wanna know if it shud be complete or nt....

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