A song unchanted
A melody unsung
A desire unknown
A story unstrung
Those notes to my heart
A want they make
A moment of bliss
A focus to break
A need, a want
So strong, so dear
And yet, apart
I tread in fear
And the sprinkling rain
Leaves a need so strong
For a caress and a touch
And a heart to belong
Raw emotions unshed
Too tough for care
A tear wants to be
And yet not there.
And then it brings back
For that all I miss
Empty, uncertain
And so i wish....
9 comments:
oye!!
nice work.......
very gud...
to want something one cannot/should not have....
we do hav such desire at one point or another(not me...but i've heard of ppl who do ;) )...
it my fave one of urs aashi..!!!
as u know..!!
First of all ..Awesome title..Repentent desire..n the poemn was so simple yet so strong!! whoa!
Way to go aashi waashi :D
thnx guys..glad you lykd it
and ray i mean tht gesture was the most touching thnx :)
dats gud
reminds me of all dose sinful desires i hav evr had.....
dat one had a web of wrds spun round me.....nd i nvr wantd to get out of it
beautiful!!!!
This was beautiful!
I can relate to this time of my life...Its still haunting me.. Very nice work..
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