Wednesday, April 04, 2007

An untrodden path

on this lonely path i travel
each step closer to my destiny
each step futher from familiarity
each step fresh new uncertain
and yet, therein where i belong

on this lonely path i travel
a new package over an old one
a tree with forever a new ring
a wheel within another wheel
and yet therein lies peace

on this lonely path i travel
past those familiar faces
past those comferting moments
past those unspoken words
and yet therein sits my goal, my end

so thus my friend i will leave you
so thus my love we will part
so thus mater uncuddle me
so thus papa let me go
for therein i have to reach
and watch you all below

6 comments:

Sumit said...

Nice....... so is it death that you are talking about??

moonstruck crackerjack said...
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moonstruck crackerjack said...

gud...
till the penultimate line i thought it was about starting a new chapter like college..shifitng somewhere 2 chase dreams etc etc...

but da last line "and watch you all below"...
so i repeat da above ques..is it abt dat thing we do not speak of...

Aditya said...

This Onez my Fav Aashi :D..

" past those familiar faces
past those comferting moments
past those unspoken words"
..

too good!!!

Hoppy said...

u hav talked bout death in an evr so casual way out hre
nd yet u get all d complexity it requires wen u mentn d end....


luvd d way u put out d eternal truth dat watevr u do
at d end its u nd only u
noone else bt jst u

Anonymous said...

Hello. And Bye.

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