Thursday, March 11, 2010

So pure, so beautiful,
Every syllable takes you back
To a childhood far bygone
A memory, a treasure
A moment, a song
For where would you find that innocence,
That choice to belong

And as the sun does set,
Each and every day
A past is born, to hold for long
When the present hurts in an unexpected way...

You can go back
Just close your eyes
And play that music again
That with which you wove your dreams
And a future so bright, so strong

Go back to that time to remind yourself
Of the journey and not the race
And if a tear does fall,
Cherish it,
For you've been a child once again...

13 comments:

a girl from yesterday... said...

"a past is born.....unexpected ways" - loved it! guess because at sm point or the other, this is what each of us feel...

Prateek Shah said...

absolutely, there are the moments that take one down memory lane and end up experiencing childhood all over again. good one Aashi :) great to see you getting back to writing regularly

Tushar said...

why is it untitled, Aashi Jo?

Beautiful piece of work.

rohini said...

such a wonderful post which made me to visit my old and gold day....ur blog look is quite nice...wish ur visit at my blog too...
http://rohini-myweirdestdreams.blogspot.com/
www.rohinirojindar.blogspot.com

Anand said...

coolio!! been long since i came up here and boy am I glad I did.. Reminded me of a poem that I wrote recently as well.
Good going.

Aashi said...

thnx people... :)..this poem well...lets just say that i took an entire day off just listening 2 old songs...going back to the fairy tales and their songs....glad ya'll liked it...nice 2 see u here dipsy...prateek as usual u help encourage me at every step...n tush lol u hv a old habit of pointing tht out...i dunno cudnt find one...when i will am sure 2 put it up... :)..hey rohini thnx..will drop in 4 sure..hey maiiii long time no see n cool wud luv 2 take a luk problm is i cnt get the link it says profile unavailable :(

POOJA... said...

having a smile on lips and few moments in front of eyes... thank you so much... beautiful poem...

The Cello Strings said...

what wonderful wording.
Glad to see you share.

Jack Edwards Poetry said...

Great poem. Love the lines:

'A memory, a treasure
A moment, a song'

Here is my post:
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/09/rose.html

shail said...

Loved it very much.

Morning said...

superb.

belladonna23 said...

this was beautiful. loved it.
hope you check out my page:
http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/09/12/random-thoughts-phantom-stars/

belladonna23 said...

this was beautiful. loved it.
hope you check out my page:
http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/09/12/random-thoughts-phantom-stars/

LinkWithin

Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...