a tear in your eye i can see
why?
is it bcoz of me
are those the soft blue eyes
that used to calm my cries
the eyes for which anyone would die
oh love why do you cry?
is it bcoz of me?
oh lord give me the key
to the solution of my love
who as gentle as a dove
cries for the land above....
2 comments:
beautiful..... no actually cute, considering the time wen u wrote it!!
well i have to say as a 11 yr old i was no tht creative infact i have to say i was much more idiot than i m rite now...
well aashi u were, are and will remain a gr8 writer and there wud be mny people waiting for ur nxt creative wrk and i m one of them...
:)
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