Wednesday, December 03, 2008

A love note...

As life takes you to eternity...
A journey so long...
A hand to hold on....
What better than that of a friend...
What better than that of yours...
A friend, my lover with whom i have no secrets...
With whom forever seems like a walk by the seashore
With each pebble a memory...
Where each wave of problems is enough to wet us but not drown...
And through it all...
You hold on to me so tight
So that even if I slip u wont let me hurt...
Love you...


7 comments:

Aditya said...

A simple and sweet poem.Of course could have been lot better for your standards.Comparing them with your prev poems , this one is a shade less brighter BUT very effective in projecting the related emotions you wanted to convey. Good one. Keep it coming fast aashi waashi >:D<

divya said...

hey aashi joshi..very cute poem....

Aashi said...

hey adi wadi...thnx a ton..and yes i will keep in mind and hopefully id be able 2 get bak to the old way of writing.. :)

@deejay!!... :D..ur alwys generous wth ur commnts..thnx sweety :)

neel said...

aww.. this 1's rele cute ... :)

Aashi said...

hey thnx embryo...gr8 hearing frm u :)

Hoppy said...

:)

u knw ntg has evr left me dis spchless.........nd i hav no idea y

:)

lv ya aachiiiiiiiii

Aashi said...

:) thnx shubhs... well it was sum scribbling i did..glad u lykd it thou :D

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