And there I stand
So aloof so apart
An uncrowned queen
With an unchained heart
So what that I am single
And what that I am alone
For there isnt a need
Nor yet a want nor a look
Of loneliness so shone
There are times I do wonder
Am i right not to give in?
But then the anwers I get
They come from deep within
Oh yes I have falterd
And yes I have sighed
And yet...
Not a tear came
Nor did a cry
For no sadness did envelope
Nor did that bittersweet crave
For a touch of a loved one
And that companionship it gave
"Look how lonely she is"
A foolish young man said
And I smiled and sailed away
On a pathway that later
I know he too will tread.
So aloof so apart
An uncrowned queen
With an unchained heart
So what that I am single
And what that I am alone
For there isnt a need
Nor yet a want nor a look
Of loneliness so shone
There are times I do wonder
Am i right not to give in?
But then the anwers I get
They come from deep within
Oh yes I have falterd
And yes I have sighed
And yet...
Not a tear came
Nor did a cry
For no sadness did envelope
Nor did that bittersweet crave
For a touch of a loved one
And that companionship it gave
"Look how lonely she is"
A foolish young man said
And I smiled and sailed away
On a pathway that later
I know he too will tread.
15 comments:
hey the poem as i had told u earlier is awesome.... somehow, i can't figure out teh use of "imperfect" as the title.....
really beautiful asshi didi:).... u really r very talented:)..keep writing such good ones:)
can u temme how u figure out d poems..dey r so well crafted
@namesake..think abt it... :)ohk...lemme explain :P
1. well no one is perfect ryt? but then do we have to change just coz of tht..??
2. a human being is a social animal..and in this poem i am alone..not lonely..but alone...goes against nature doesnt it?
well...think on these two points...i hope it wud anwer ur query :D
@sneha...thnx sweetumz!!!! tht is sooo sweet of u and i hope 2 continue..hope to see u encouraging me just the same way.. :)
@eshu...i dont "figure" them out eshu...n frankly i really hope to steal ur talent of writing with such innocence...my poems really lack tht.... care 2 teach me buddy :)
Beautiful poem you've written. How much I could relate to it. :)
Thanks. Keep writing.
BTW, have you seen my poems ? Just started writing 3 months back.. somethings happen so sudden. :)
hey cuckoo gr8 2 cya here :) glad u lykd the poem and yeh i guess sum myt b able 2 relate to it
and of course id love 2 chck out ur poems.. :)
Okay, while there are many namesakes for people in this world. But a name like aashi, i guess its worth a try.
Did you write earlier on a blog Kartography as well? Do let me know.
And heyy, i forgot about this poem, in the course of teh question.
Lonelyness is like a new boy/girl in the class. One who we all someday befriend. What say?
hey aakash :)
nopes me never had tht blog gng...mustv been my namesake ;) lol....nice 2 knw abt another aashi joshi......
hmm n hey thnx 4 the comment buddy....only thts the one thing i wanned 2 show...tht loneliness is very diffrnt than being alone...
here the girl is alone....and not lonely....its only not so easy for the world 2 understnd tht..she is actually njoying her status of being alone with herself...and each person in the end wud follow.......
awesome... again...
Solitude is a blessing, loneliness is debatable (my opinion, of course). :)
@pooja ...thnk u....again.... :) hope i can make u keep coming back :)
@gurdit....i agree on that with u but problem is...not many can distinguish..
Hey Aashi, lovely work. You said it very true that being alone doesn't always mean being lonely. Great work!!
thank u vishal :)
Many thanks.
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